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Post by mardy on Mar 16, 2002 13:33:12 GMT -5
here's a lyric I wrote while posting on mx. I wrote in about 5 minutes, what do you think?
My head is leaning right
envision me with closed eyes
thinking of this world
I pretend to live in my slumber
My dreams come true
All the people
All the hands
All the eyes
Eclipse my vision
My difference
notice me crying
I cheat on your comfort
Its all gone tomorrow
Add my love and you
feed the peasants
stones falling down on them
running to come nowhere
please wake up my king
notice them crying
all the hearts beating
all the jaws biting
bricks of air
die in fear
Circulate my head I move in waves
In my mind
In my mind
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Post by mardy on Mar 18, 2002 4:08:12 GMT -5
*bump*
come on!
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Post by skatoGDL on Mar 18, 2002 17:43:48 GMT -5
i say reflections  |
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Post by guitar_gurl on Mar 19, 2002 1:04:52 GMT -5
ooo that's a tough choice..i'll come back to you on that one.
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Post by mardy on Mar 20, 2002 16:03:10 GMT -5
reflections sounds too used to me, but ok...maybe.
And please someone comment the song!
And this new one:
Nonameyet:
Wash myself in words
Take my hand off the sword
lay my arms wide open
Confess!
Lay back!
Smile, and pretend
Let the story take its beginning
Panic
I am sick
Fight all my favourites
Rule lives today
Alone all the way
I'm not your expected visit
But here I am
Cutting, never ending
Soaked, never clean
weakening and weaker
I am watching my decision
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Randy
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Post by Randy on Mar 22, 2002 6:35:55 GMT -5
yeh, go w/ reflections i reckon
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Ozmodius
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Post by Ozmodius on Mar 23, 2002 14:12:09 GMT -5
Too late... It's already been named Waves.
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Post by mardy on Mar 24, 2002 7:21:04 GMT -5
årh, det kan altid skiftes
its can always be changed
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Ozmodius
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Post by Ozmodius on Apr 15, 2002 15:20:24 GMT -5
Then change it to Reflections!!!
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Post by SoISaysToTheGuy on Apr 15, 2002 15:35:10 GMT -5
waves. reflections seems kind of corny/overdone
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Post by mardy on Apr 15, 2002 16:03:04 GMT -5
waves. reflections seems kind of corny/overdone Exactly! Thats what I've been saying. |
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Post by NeW_SKiN on Apr 15, 2002 19:21:47 GMT -5
Mardy, why are you asking people's opinions then arguing with them?  |
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Post by LiVEandUncut on Apr 16, 2002 0:35:49 GMT -5
why dont you just write a new song?
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Post by mardy on Apr 17, 2002 8:51:24 GMT -5
New_Skin:thats because I settled for that opinion after I posted this thread.
But; I got a better idea; I'm simply go the 3rd way and call it fro "Waves/Reflections" or "Reflections/Waves" ;D
LiveANDUncut:
I got lotta lyrics I've written.
Do you want me to post one?
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